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Factual Knowledge
The essay shows a reasonable knowledge of the relevant theories and case studies and it is generally accurate and reasonably comprehensive although a little more detail could be offered regarding the detail and evolution of the competing kinship theories.
65%
Awareness of Scholarly Opinion
There appears a good demonstration of the main relevant issues and opinions with a clear explanation of the two main competing theories although this could be more directly linked to the sources.
65%
Expression of Argument/Use of Language
The piece uses a high level of quite specialised language which is generally coherent and intelligible.
65%
Structure
A clear, logical structure is displayed tracing the evolution of the theories with an attempt at a sensible conclusion.
65%
Critical Judgement
Mostly relevant with a balanced critique of sources, although some are given much less coverage than others (eg Morgan, Lopez and Levi-Strauss) although this may be because their theories are more minor and this may have led to a slightly indistinct conclusion.
60%
Presentation
Generally, reasonably good with various informative detail although the formatting, especially in the Resources section could have been a little tidier and more headings in the main part.
60%
Referencing
This displayed a reasonably wide range of relevant sources, correctly cited
65%
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